| John Darley and Bibb Latané consider a persons
inability to act in a crisis the result of a few key factors. The one most plausable and
obvious to the average citizen is indifference. According to these two professors of
psychology the average citizen is mistaken. What appears to be indifference is most
usually uncertainty. Once a potential emergency is noticed, a bystander must feel
"personal responsibility for intervention" and risk looking foolish in front of
a crowd if he asseses the situation wrongly. Darley and Latané state that the greatest
influence on a witness of an emergency is the reaction of those around him. "If
everyone else is calm and indifferent, they will tend to remain so; if everyone else is
reacting strongly, they are likely to do so as well." For example, a crowd draws
gaping around a fallen individual on the street. Chances are, others would follow suit out
of curiosity and concern. On the same street a woman sits on the sidewalk crying and no
one looks in her direction. A passerby assumes the situation cant be that serious if
everyone else is walking by without consideration. Why should he take responsibility? We
all do this every day. I pass by the homeless in Santa Barbara without looking, hardly
noticing, because I was brought up to do so. If one of the women were to be crying or
clutching herself, I am sure I would create an excuse not to stop; a simple explanation of
why she could be in such a state to relieve my conscence. Everyone else would be doing the
same. She could have been raped, or beaten. She may be starving or giving birth for all we
know. Yet if we stop and the woman is angry or crazy, she may cause a scene, and then we
would look foolish and feel embarrassed. I can relate to Darley and Latanés theory,
and I agree with it. If I truly thought the woman had been raped or was giving birth, I
would help. I am not indifferent, merely uncertain. People are not cruel by nature, but
they do get scared.
In a different way, this also explains the more severe cases studied by the professors
as well. The boy attacked on the subway, the woman with a broken leg, the stabbing in the
parking lot; in all of these situations the crisis were obvious and still no one assisted
the victims. Fear and uncertainty are again the explanation. Eleven people abanded a
seventeen year old stab victim and no one went back to help him. I can imagine the
frightened group huddled in a separate car, no one offering to return and all of them
expecting someone else to do their duty.
A school friend of mine found herself in an emergency not long ago and suffered the
same lack of assistance. In the middle of class she began to have convulsions. They grew
more violent and more intense with each passing second, but the class sat dumbfounded only
able to stare. At last a teacher went to her and attempted to calm her down while barking
orders to the class. The police were called and she was rushed away. It was soon found out
that this girl had epillepsy and had suffered her first attack. She was fine, but the rest
of the class felt disturbed and guilty. They had been so apalled at the sight, so
frightened, that they could not even comprehend the idea of helping her. It was not until
the spell was broken by the teachers rigid voice that their minds began to function
logically again. They did not act immediately because they were scared and no one else was
setting an example. If one student had jumped up, they all would have. After such an
incident I must agree with Darley and Latané in that indifference is not the cause for
inaction.
Instincts tell us to do one thing, logic another, but uncertainty can make people
ignore even the most obvious crisis situations. We depend on one another at such times. If
only one person would show compassion or concern, the rest of us would most likely do so
as well. We need to learn to control fear and put other peoples needs above our own.
In an emergency lives are at stake, and if we continue to follow the crowd, lives may be
lost. It is important for people to understand why they react the way they do in crisis so
they can overcome the factors that contribute to an unsatifactory reaction, and instead
react responsibly. |
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This essay demonstrates strong writing skills. It
begins by highlighting the writers view that Darley and Latané do not pay enough
attention to fear in discussing how people act in emergency situations, thus predicting
the emphasis of the essay as a whole. It goes on to show how Darley and Latanés
three stages of decision-making do explain some of the lack of response they describe, but
then discusses in detail two examplesthe murder of Andrew Mormille from the passage
itself, and the writers own experience of passing cars that have broken down on the
roadto show with thoughtful detail how fear motivates the behavior of many
bystanders. It concludes by conceding that there may be hundreds of factors that help
motivate each bystanders decision, but reemphasizes the importance of fear,
"one of the most common human emotions." Throughout, this essays
paragraphs are tightly organized and cohesive; its varied sentences structures and precise
words convey its ideas effectively. Overall Evaluation: STRONG WRITING |