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In my opinion, the attitudes toward the roles of men and women have changed drastically. The women are looked at to have much more opportunities than before. They are also known to be more assertive and demanding. It is looked at as both a negative and a positive opinion. Females are able to decide whether they want to stay at home to care for their children and to do household chores or to have a career set and a job. Also, most women are very independent and are the one's who are asking men to date. The men now days are the one's who can stay at home to care for the children and do household chores. Men seem to be optimistic about the roles of the female. Yet they still have the stereotype of being very aggressive and tough. The men are also known to be the head members of their family. Meaning what he decides and says is right. In many situations, that attitude still remains the same, yet it has also changed whereas the women are now the head members of the family.

This essay is typical of many found at the 3 level- while the errors in grammar, mechanics, usage, and sentence structure might be minimal, the student simply has not generated enough writing in 45 minutes to produce an adequately organized and developed essay.

 


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